We began the class by reviewing pronouns. We watched the clip below:
http://www.schooltube.com/video/cf3e7fff3db76def26a8/
Students then watched me edit a paragraph.
We then watched the clip from which the paragraph was based (start at about 15 min)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dzm_pTghRsk
Students were then each provided with a paragraph and asked to edit this paragraph. Students were to pay particular attention to:
1) run-on sentences
2) sentence fragments
3) descriptive language
4) the five senses
Students finished with a worksheet identifying sentence fragments.
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